Farm logo

[beavis]

Working on a farm logo and this is my first rough draft attempt....

Suggestions?

criticism?

All are welcome...

 

[vfem]

What is this a logo for exactly?! For a website? For a sign at your house?

I can't critique unless I know where its going... I must know the details. Us art critiques are critiquity on our own terms you know! DARLING!

LMAO

But seriously... where's it going to go?!

 

[beavis]

I am envisioning a metal sign to install at my residence for starters...

And something oval in shape.

Something to hang on my property......

 

[wifezilla]

The font is getting lost.

I would like it if the individual pieces of art were closer in style.

If I was going to put it in an oval, I would select the image of the people and crop is so they were large and on the left and the type was on the right.

Another option is to use a knock out of the text and have it over the illustrations.

(Why yes, I am a graphic designer...why do you ask? LOL)

 

[beavis]

The font is getting lost.

I would like it if the individual pieces of art were closer in style.

If I was going to put it in an oval, I would select the image of the people and crop is so they were large and on the left and the type was on the right.

Another option is to use a knock out of the text and have it over the illustrations.

(Why yes, I am a graphic designer...why do you ask? LOL)

Ooooh! Fell like messing around with it? Please, please, pretty please???

 

[wifezilla]

Maybe tomorrow at work. Can you email me a high resolution file?

 

[beavis]

I did it in powerpoint, not sure it it is in hi-res based on the mixed graphics....

 

[smom1976]

I like the pictures.. but for some reason I am seeing them like on a wine label or something like that...

for me: the top needs to be a darker color with different text font .. and maybe a gold band or somthing other than black seperating the top from the picures..

I dont know how all those square picures would look "squished" oval??

but your off to a great start!

 

[vfem]

Yeah, I was getting the feeling of a label too. Something you would wrap around a bottle.

I agree the font is getting lost with the images. I think the images are too many, and in the form of side by side leaves you no room for a nice finish because you are moving it to an oval background.

Also, the mix of images you use are of different types.... like modern, is mixed with classic and realism.

Would you like the subdued colors in your layout more then the bright?! I'd go with Wifezilla's option.... chose the people or one other you really like and set it to a side and the font to the other. Give the font more precence.

I was thinking of grabbing your image and shoving it in Photoshop to see what I could do. Logo work is fun.

 

[vfem]

Ok I did it anyways, thought it would be fun.