Pulsegleaner
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"Corn" and "Hoodoo" don't HAVE to rhyme, since "Hoodoo" is his title and will always be followed by "man" it'll never be the last word in a stanza. I have plenty of other synonyms to use in that case, like "spell", "curse" (a good one, since I can rhyme it with "worse") etc. Just because I use two words doesn't mean those two words have to rhyme.i like it. trying to figure out how corn rhymes with hoodoo (other than remotely if it comes out as doodoo on the other end of the processing chambers )...
instantly it strikes me as something like what Dr. Seuss would write and those usually were interesting and some were definitely not PC (and are being frowned at now).
It's a bit Dr. Seuss like, but I was planning to go for a slightly older audience, so I could use more complicated words. I was thinking more along the lines of what Orson Scott Card did when he wrote "Prentice Alvin and the No-Good Plow". (where he, in verse, more or less laid out what would be the entire plot of one of what would become one of his Alvin Maker books, as well as some bits from some of the later ones, including from the last one he never wrote (and probably never will.)